The next cut we've produced is an improved rough cut. On revision, we rearranged much of the content, getting rid of as much excess as we could leaving us with around eight minuets of concise material. The structure of it has been much improved also, we realised that while on paper five lines of text doesn't seem like a lot, once you get the material, that one section can last anywhere up to 5 five minuets. As a result we've made more transitions between contributors, a decision we feel improves the pace of the film.

The fragmented clips toward the end of the time line are bits of interview we deemed unnecessary and therefore scrapped. We thought it better to run under time rather than contain irrelevant material that slowed the film down.